I've uploaded the amends as noted at #46 for review. Please read through the copy and check and mark out any errors. If you allow my suggestions, there are some parts I feel its not necessary for title caps as it affects the flow of reading and may affect what the audience may register or remember.
Please take your time to review #8 and #6 . My attempt was to break up the information into more bite size sections and also to give the information a sense of hierarchy If there's any thing you wish to add, just drop me a message.