This is my advisor suggestion.
In my view, your literature review is weak and it reflects on the rest of your proposal. It is based on review of a limited number of sources and the quality on these sources is not good. Journal of Business Venturing, Entrepreneurship, Theory & Practice, International Small Business Journal, Entrepreneurship & Regional Development, Small Business Economics, Journal of Small Business Management, Journal of Small Business & Enterprise Development, International Journal of Entrepreneurial Behaviour & Research, International Journal of Entrepreneurship & Innovation, Journal of International Entrepreneurship, International Entrepreneurship & Management Journal and Journal of Entrepreneurship are amongst the best journals in entrepreneurship and you should search for relevant literature to review in these journals.
It is important that at the end of your literature review, you identify a research gap. This means that you explain what research has already been done, what has not been done and how your research is focused in the area which has not been researched. Then you should state your research questions and discuss how the answer to these questions would fill the research gap that you have identified.
My comment :
( Im very picky and I wouldn't expect any work if its not perfect !! )
( I like to keep in touch always, I like to work together , in order to meet his requirements)
(NO PLIGARISM PLEASE !!!!! )
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I am an MBA graduate having studies all the subjects required for this project and also have hands on practical experience working in the domains that demand knowledge of these subjects.