I'm planning to submit my application for a graduate film school. I was asked to Describe an emotionally significant experience in my life and how it affected me. (2,000 characters maximum). I wrote two stories, but not sure which one I should submit. My specializing isn't writing, I'm not a writer and the school doesn't expect me to be. I don't think the school cares about my ability to write in terms of fancy vocabs and language tricks, but more like was it a good content? did the reader connect with it? Did it address and generate emotions?
I need someone who can read them for me and give me an opinion.
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Sir, You can trust me and share your both the stories. I will give my full potential in judging which one is better and also if required with suitable editing.