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Hello! We are two belgians who are launching their first business.. unfortunately English is not our native language. Therefor we'd like to have a creative mind who's native language is English and is able to rewrite the content of our website.

This won't be a single task, we'll need a freelance writer from time to time (upcoming blog posts, new webpages, branding, ...).

To make the selection process a bit easier for us, I present you a small writing challenge. Below is a 109-word-example, and I challenge you to improve what we've written:

"Is your wanderlust running out of control? No more cool ideas for your next trip? Hire the Bro Scene founders and plan a badass trip together. Whether it’s a romantic city trip or an extremely alcoholic bachelor party. Our goal is to listen to your needs and show you the most epic things you can do in Europe. Unfortunately when planning a trip you also need to fix how to get there and where to sleep. Well, we take care of that too by finding the cheapest flights and best spots in town! Nothing will be booked by us, that is the only thing we leave up to you."

Side information: both of us are 25, the website is about travel (hidden gems, travel planning, tips & tricks). We target every traveler in the world between the age of 18-35. Our content should be a hilarious read, while still being informative.

I wish you a lot of luck and hopefully we can work together in the near future as many translation requests will be coming shortly!

Editing

Project ID: #8869994

About the project

35 proposals Remote project Active Dec 16, 2015

35 freelancers are bidding on average $139 for this job

philmakerz

S A M P L E_ A D D E D_ B E L O W_ A S_ P R O M I S E D__________________________________________________________________ Has your wanderlust wandered off? Has your get-up-and-go got up and gone? H More

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hopmarketing

Attention all 18-35 year olds who are planning a trip to Europe ... hire the Bro Scene founders to plan a badass trip together, where you will discover hidden gems, local knowledge and tips and tricks to make your trav More

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swift555

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csimpson6

Hi Guys, My name is Claire and I am a writer with a lot of experience. I have private clients but I use this job board when I need some extra work. I am a native UK English speaker based in the UK. I have done a rewri More

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namitajain68

Is wanderlust rushing full speed into your bloodstream? Is traveling itch making you desperate for a break like no other? Are you finding it a tough task to find the coolest place and the hottest things to do in Euro More

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CockerPhD

Hi there, I've added the modified text below. Look forward to hearing from you. Do you feel like you need an escape, like real soon? Running out of ideas for your next big adventure? Well why not hire the Bro Scen More

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writepal925

bid is for rewriting 30 500-word articles in error-free, fluff-free, plagiarism-free american english. below is my sample rewrite of your 109-word sample. thanks. "Is your wanderlust running out of control? No mor More

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marandagomes

See for yourself how I can make your writing better. If you want it to have a humorous tone, it should still sound professional or else no one will trust you with their money. I hold a Bachelor of Business and can be More

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modamus

Hi there, I am a Canadian proofreader, editor and translator and English is my native language (beware of those who aren't native speakers!! ;). I have read your advertisement closely and feel that I would be a good More

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Annetter

I have over 15 years of marketing experience and currently run my own marketing communications business. I can re-write your web content ensuring it is well written, engaging and relevant to your audience. Please More

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elvinh1

Dear Sir or Madam, “Words are, of course, the most powerful Weapon used by mankind.” To anyone who's looking, it's clear: necessity for content is increasing. Smart content creator attracts everyone, from the More

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Vidamor

Good Day, I hope you are well? I have a Diploma in Non-Fiction writing. I have been writing for the past ten years of which my work has been published in newspapers and magazines. Please view my portfolio to see More

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RimaAllaham

My first language is French I am a native speaker of English I have 30 year editing experience I am detail oriented I am a perfectionist

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sascheller

Hey guys! My name is Sergio, and although my profile says I'm Polish, in fact I am bilingual Polish and English writer and translator, having lived in the US and the UK, practically my whole life. I am very excited More

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vayana

Hi, here's a little rewrite of your sample: Are you looking for new horizons to explore, but lack any ideas for your next trip? Bro Scene is here for the rescue! Whether it’s a romantic city trip or a movie-style ba More

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kmpadias

Is your wanderlust running out of control? Out of adventure ideas for your next trip? Contact Bro Scene Founders and let’s plan that next awesome adventure together. Whether it’s a romantic city trip or a completely dr More

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incredibledeshy

Good Day Sir ! I believe that my level of English both in written and spoken makes me a very competitive candidate for this EDITING project. I will do all your editing tasks perfectly and deliver it to you well b More

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kingsfield1

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HoodedCrow

Hi guys! I'm your friendly neighbourhood writer/translator. Your website project sounds like something I would like to use myself, as I love to wander and see the world while not taking myself too seriously. I am cu More

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laurenambrosepr

Hi Bro Scene My name is Lauren, I am a public relations professional within the property sector. I'm looking to take on some projects in my spare time to keep me busy, which led me to the freelancer website. Your pr More

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