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I need something enticing, that will be able to grab the client’s attention. I have started on something and I need someone who can take it to the next level. I don’t need it to have all the fancy words, but I need it to flow and tell a good story. To give some background this is a consulting firm, focused on strategy and innovation.
AlphaBCG is the name of the company and will cater to private equity, corporate, and startup clients. Keeping that in mind, please try to format and edit and being the content below and take it to the next level. This will be used on the website.