Emotive Obesity

by TammyBerko
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This is a paragraph excerpt from a creative piece of work that I was commissioned for. It is a short story that describes a man by his body parts. At the beginning of the story the man just seems morbidly obese and stupid, but as the story progresses the reader begins to realize that there is much more to the man. The work starts by describing the man's forehead and ends with a descriptive remark about his shoes. It is in this paragraph that the reader slowly begins to realize that the man is wealthy, educated, and became obese from emotional eating after his wife passed away. This work focuses on the destructive power of love and societies quick dismissal of people. The example paragraph is about the man's chin.

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