Design graphic on a Cargo Van for my Car wash Business

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  • kenarslaner
    Contest Holder
    • 9 years ago

    Thanks for letting me know about your trip. Have safe one.

    • 9 years ago
    1. tomislavludvig
      tomislavludvig
      • 9 years ago

      Thank you, I really have to start packing now. I will review all of what you mentioned in the comments and I'm going to work on it on Sunday evening (if not too tired from the trip), or on Monday morning. Talk to you soon.

      • 9 years ago
    2. kenarslaner
      Contest Holder
      • 9 years ago

      Tom, please check your mail for details.

      • 9 years ago
  • kenarslaner
    Contest Holder
    • 9 years ago

    The middle panel: not sure how if it would look better if we push the phone number and web address just a little bit below (right above the black rubber side molding) and perhaps adjust the scale down (size of the fonts)?? need to try and see if it would still be easy to read the phone number and the web address. Also extending the steam beyond all the way to the front panel above the front tire to finish it off with a curve to follow above the tire line (just short of half way the front tire). In the back middle panel, you curved (bent back) steam end (in blue) that looks like a leaf which I like. Can we duplicate and bend the green steam in the middle door next to the space in between the number 6054 and the line where the front panel starts. It would be great if you can curve it to the left (opposite direction to blue one) and make it the same size in green color that you had the blue one (would look like a green leaf).

    • 9 years ago
  • kenarslaner
    Contest Holder
    • 9 years ago

    First Pass- Overall the side looks great and need only few adjustments. Upper section: The logo- you will replace it with the file that I will send shortly. The text below it looks great and straight. The back panel and back middle panel with the steam gun and the steam looks perfect and no change.

    • 9 years ago
  • kenarslaner
    Contest Holder
    • 9 years ago

    Thanks for your quick response. Your steam design and colors are superior and it looks classy. I like the side and the back clean, simple and not too busy. You voiced this concern at the very beginning which I completely agree with you. The balance is delivering the message what we do without making it too busy. Your design combined with selected message will accomplish that.

    • 9 years ago
    1. tomislavludvig
      tomislavludvig
      • 9 years ago

      Great, thank you. I was wondering how tied are you to the 3 paragraphs below the Sharplinewash logo? It would be really great if there was less text there. Maybe just focus on one punch line that will not require alot of time to read and it will be even less busy than it is now. Think about your main feature that will lead all the costumers to your website, or make them call you.

      • 9 years ago
  • kenarslaner
    Contest Holder
    • 9 years ago

    In short, I am certainly leaning to work with you as the designer. Your travel should not effect the progress if we can connect on Sunday sometime.

    • 9 years ago
    1. tomislavludvig
      tomislavludvig
      • 9 years ago

      Great, also you have a pending period of 2 weeks to choose after the contest upload period expires, and you don't have to choose no one until then. Which means we have almost a week and a half when I get back on Sunday, we can do miracles by then.

      • 9 years ago
  • kenarslaner
    Contest Holder
    • 9 years ago

    I agree that both web address and phone number should be together. I will send (email) the logo to you shortly in illustrator format.

    • 9 years ago
  • kenarslaner
    Contest Holder
    • 9 years ago

    Your last design submittal looks in the direction where I think I want to be. I placed 5 star on it to move your design to the top of the list. Here is some feed back and answers to your questions. I would much prefer the phone number and web address to be on the front door so I think the spot for those two are good. Need to make sure the font size is not too large. scale wise.

    • 9 years ago
  • tomislavludvig
    tomislavludvig
    • 9 years ago

     

    Hi again Ken,

    I've uploaded only side for now.

    I just could not fit the phone number on the middle door. It's just interfering with the steam too much and it becomes unreadable.

    Also I would suggest to keep the info together, you don't want the viewers to jump from one side for the phone and to the other for the website info.

    Waiting for your feedback on the side design.

    Please send me the vector files for the logo, I can't get the underline from the logo to be readable from the photo you've uploaded.

    Also one more thing. If you choose me as a winner I will provide full service even after the contest is finished. So you don't have to be limited by the time of this contest. We will keep communicating and get this done right. That is my guarantee.

    Also I need to let you know that I am going on a trip to Poland tomorrow morning, and will be back on Sunday. We can work on this when I come back,

    How do you feel about this?

    • 9 years ago

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