need a story for book on determinism

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Prize: $54
Entries Received: 35
Winner: sagorchandraF

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I'm looking for a true introductory story that would grab attention and show how life is not individual merit but rather based on circumstances and environment. That even the great success could be predicted. That truly there is no reason to blame anyone for their failure nor praise anyone for their success. It is determined. Somewhat similar to the hockey story from Malcolm Gladwell in the book Outliers. My book is about Less Self. That when we zoom out we can see there is no such thing as a self. Everything is part of a system and connected to another system. I need a story to show the irrelevance of praise or blame.

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nitinjoshi79
- 1 year ago
Dear CH, can you please review #42 ?
- 1 year ago
nitinjoshi79
- 1 year ago
Hope the CH is checking the stories for plagiarism. Some are being simply copied, like this: https://www.nature.com/articles/436150a
- 1 year ago
azizulislam2294
- 1 year ago
I think mine is more of an exception than everyone else's story. The story is written with a completely organic and practical talent development. You will definitely like the story.
I think mine is more of an exception than everyone else's story. The story is written with a completely organic and practical talent development. You will definitely like the story.
Please check entry # 39
- 1 year ago
armansran129
- 1 year ago
Check #38 This story shows us the effect of circumstances and environment on human life
- 1 year ago
shishi77
- 1 year ago
Please check #34
- 1 year ago
msadia734
- 1 year ago
Please check no. 30
- 1 year ago
azizulislam2294
- 1 year ago
Sir, #7 #28 please check. because new update story
- 1 year ago
PenWriter08
- 1 year ago
Hi contest holder, having gone through your contest's details, I perfectly know what you actually want, but drafting a full storyline only to get it posted as an entry isn't so safe as sealing the entry requires money, so if you could make this a project for the freelancer of your choice and give the person specific and more detailed information about your job, I'm certainly sure that you'd get the best cos out here, there are myriads of write-ups that are not related to what you stipulated in the details of the contest.
- 1 year ago
Contest Holder
- 1 year ago
I think the main point is about discounting meritocracy. that life is genes and memes not personal. Circumstantial. So the story or research would be describing how life is not individual but systemic. Based on many factors that influence our life.
- 1 year ago
1. PenWriter08
  - 1 year ago
  To avoid copied and pasted write-ups, I recommend that you make this a project so as to get the best story. I understand your points perfectly well, but drafting a story and posting it as an entry isn't so safe as it could be copied. So sir, I greatly advise you make this a project and you'd get your story in no time and in any format you want it be it as a prose or even in poetic form cos the the theme of life being circumstantial is deeply poetic.
  - 1 year ago
nitinjoshi79
- 1 year ago
Is there a word limit?
- 1 year ago
mfaisal2415
- 1 year ago
Hi Sir,...Kindly share some details regarding main key points, the length of the story and also that your demand is a story or some philosophical background basically?
- 1 year ago