I need a childrens book written

In Progress Posted 7 years ago Paid on delivery
In Progress Paid on delivery

Need to read my story and rewrite.

Joseph Ran TOO Fast!

Joseph David seemed like a normal 10 year old. You see, on pretty days after school, Joseph liked to practice Parkour, a training using discipline and complex movements, flips, rolling, swinging and many other complex movements to advance through the obstacles in his back yard. He crossed the monkey bars and did flips off the ramp on his fort. Sometimes he would climb to the top post and stand on one foot with his hands in the air above his head. It was just after spring break on a Monday, it was raining hard, when Joseph and his little brother Benjamin got home from school. Joseph wanted to go outside to play but it was way too wet. Joseph’s dad has a treadmill that he walks on daily to get exercise, with a TV on the wall he can watch while he walks. Joseph asked his dad if he could run on the treadmill. Joseph’s dad said yes, as long as he attached the safety shut off clip to his shirt. Joseph attached the safety clip to his shirt and began to run. Joseph was a good runner. He often race on foot against his little brother on his motorcycle. Joseph was running fast on the treadmill and was continuing to increase his speed. Just then something began to happen. Something was changing. It seemed as if time itself was being distorted. The room was changing. All at once Joseph was not at home. He was at a different place, a place he recognized. It looked like the T-Shirt and hat stand in the large theme park he and his family had been on vacation the year before. Joseph and his brother both had gotten custom hats here. Yes, this was the place, but different. Everything was newer, more modern, cutting edge technology. There was even a super awesome robot doing the painting instead of the man that had been there before. The robot could spin around and paint several projects at one time. All of his fingers were different color sprat tips. Each finger could spin around and change spray size and pattern while all the others were continuing to paint. He was way faster than the man. It was epic. The robot looked at Joseph as if he could read his mind, and just that quick handed Joseph a completed custom hat more awesome than he had ever seen. The robot produced a mirror for Joseph to see how the hat looked on him. Joseph looked in the mirror. The hat was awesome, but there was something even more fascinating. Joseph now had a full mustache, and he looked older. How could this be? He was only 10. But now he looked 25. As Joseph was staring at his mustache, a buzzer sounded. It was the timer on the treadmill. Joseph had reached the goal he had set. Somehow he was back at home and everything was back to normal. Joseph was trying to figure out if maybe he had just daydreamed about the robot and the hat stand. The TV was on and there was a show on about robots. Just then Joseph’s dad said good run. Where did you get that cool hat?

Arts & Crafts Fashion Design Short Stories

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17 proposals Remote project Active 7 years ago

17 freelancers are bidding on average $150 for this job

PhDWriting

Bid Summary I look forward to speaking to you further to discuss your writing needs, with my commitment to providing a first-class service at all times, my writing service is one you can rely on. Project Requirements More

$244 USD in 3 days
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rta57ae2d68bb124

Bid Summary Hi, I've gone through your story. It's fun and really fascinating, and I'm completely engrossed. However, I think it needs a lot of work and development and i can help with that. Project Requirements Curre More

$150 USD in 1 day
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Dreamofdesigners

Bid Summary professional work Project Requirements Hi, JOB TITLE: Design a Logo We can deliver DESIGN ( 2-4 Initial Logo Concepts) Unlimited Revisoin less than 24 hours with professionalism. We will provide .ai, .psd More

$500 USD in 1 day
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SGSgraphics

Bid Summary Apart from all this i want to build a long term relationship with you. Infact i regularly keep you updated regarding the project you are giving me and make you satisfied. Project Requirements Apart from al More

$31 USD in 1 day
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beyondthemist

Bid Summary Hi, I am an expert in writing stories with an experience of over 6 years in the respective field, I shall deliver the best for you, just try my ability :) Regards Project Requirements The project needs rew More

$100 USD in 3 days
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Savvy13

Bid Summary I can rewrite your story for $5/100 words, open to negotiation. I'd be happy to provide samples of my work. We can discuss details on chat. Project Requirements I believe I will have to take the available More

$45 USD in 2 days
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wordchain3

Bid Summary We can deliver your desired stories on time and on budget. Project Requirements We fully understand that you’re in need of a dependable freelancer who can write rewrite creatively. We’re excited to share More

$30 USD in 3 days
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Zackkhan19

Bid Summary $260 - Written in 3rd person - Unlimited revisions Project Requirements Need a short story rewritten Relevant Skills and Experience I am a native speaker and a professional Writer/editor (copy, line/subst More

$260 USD in 3 days
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nishuchandna

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$111 USD in 4 days
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halliek2000

I can rewrite the story to flow freely and convey the idea you desire.

$144 USD in 4 days
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