Book Review Edit

Book Review Received a grade of C. Edit is required please. Book is (5 Days that shook the world - Seattle and Beyond) 8 pages are already written but need to be edited for a chance to get a better grade. Comments received on the paper. - Introduction have failed to identify the author's purpose, method, and thesis. Much of the paper was incoherent and difficult to read. The analysis was poor and lacked the required three page length. You may rewrite the paper for a better grade. Paper requirements: 2. Papers should have subheadings to denote introduction(1/2 PAGE), Summary (3 PAGES), Analysis (3 PAGES), and Conclusion (1/2 PAGE). 3. Paginate. 4. Introduction should give background to the issue at hand, rather than jumping to “the purpose of this book....” 5. Mention the actual book and the author in the introduction. 6. Follow the title of the book with the publisher and year in parentheses. 7. Introduction should clearly state the purpose of the book, the methodology, and the thesis. 8. Critical analysis should be a response to the literature based on research and what you already know. 9. Critical response should be fact-based and should not include statements that begin with “I feel” or “I believe.” -10. Critical response should not be reduced to anecdotes about people who you knew in high school, etc. - 11. Critical analysis should not be a literary review wherein you are merely comparing two authors; it should be your own educated response.